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how i feel
Contributed by
Xxcrying4youxx
on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:30:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Im tired of crying,all of the lying just break my heart in 2,
i wish you understood what im saying or even whether your feelings are true
im so confused about how you feel,we fight and i cry
things just get worse with time, i wish i could stay but its easier if i go,
im hurting and you just cant tell,how bad this hurts
you tell me not to cry but if i dont then i just break down inside
i dont want it to end like this,u dont realize what u have
the comments that i make, the love that i send
and if u left tonight it would be impossible to mend
why do things have to end, i love you more than you know
even more than i could ever think,
i never knew to love someone could hurt this bad
i never knew the one i want could make me so sad
I always though you were the only one to make my tears stop
but it seems you bring them as much as they do
i hate to say my life isnt as easy as i thought it would be
with you by my side....
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2005-08-03 00:30:57]
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Re: how i feel
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by BlindRomantic on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 01:08:09 AM AEST
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| I know EXACTLY how you feel.. first hand. Just trust me when I say, if you ever need someone to talk with, I'd be glad to be that person. I just want you to know that love isn't what hurts, it's what happened.. if you really think about it, I know you'll agree. Love is what made you happy when you were together, not the reason you're apart. I think you did a great job of expressing yourself through this piece, keep up the good work. |
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Re: how i feel
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 02:51:55 AM AEST
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you expressed the very same feelings i am now mending day by day, to love someone so much it rips your heart out to keep loving them, i am here if you need someone to talk to, it helps to have someone who has walked in you shoes just to talk to. this was a beautiful poem,
tasha |
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Re: how i feel
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:10:08 PM AEST
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| I got tired of crying too .. just stopped. good emote though. |
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