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painful lines
Contributed by
all_that_i_can_be
on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 01:07:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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the deep lines
so straight
so perfect
so real
they hurt so bad
but i bask in the pain
because the pain,
if even for only one fleeting moment
distracts me
from the much deeper pain
and the hate
that so unmercifully surrounds me
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2005-08-03 01:07:13]
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Re: painful lines
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by Ineedanap on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 01:10:29 AM AEST
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Wow... short and well worded. Great write
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Re: painful lines
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by BlindRomantic on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 01:14:47 AM AEST
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| Beautiful. Expressed wonderfully. |
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Re: painful lines
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 02:47:19 AM AEST
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hate should never control you, great poem
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