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What if?
Contributed by
sylviawalters
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Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 03:49:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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How can people all be the same?
They act like life's just a big game
They just want to be old, grow up
Then want their youth back in a golden cup
Always wanting dreams to come true
But what would happen, if they do?
What would happen in we could fly?
And what is no-one ever wanted to die?
Would would be do if everyone was perfect?
How many lives would that affect?
So why can't people just see?
And act like who they're meant to be.
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2005-08-03 03:49:11]
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Re: What if?
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 02:29:55 PM AEST
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| If I could fly??? the world would seem limitless .. good job. |
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Re: What if?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 03:40:05 PM AEST
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| Hm a good poem, I believe a revise is much needed though, SLipSiX. |
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