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Angel Child
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Theres a girl, covered by her blackened mask and dirty hair
Laughing, crying because they dont understand
Her broken head full of candy dreams and broken promises
Held in place by her tear-stained hands.
Her pain wracked body rocks without a sound
And all the people walking past turn away
As she slowly looks up, and looks around
Stares the world in the eye for one last day.
She laughs at the sky and laughs at God
She thanks him for everything he didnt do
Tells him it didnt matter what he told her
Nothings real anymore, its so untrue.
And, as she dances with the rain on her wounded skin
And, as it falls on her beautiful face
It washes off the wounds, and lets purity in
It shows some kind of wicked, an underlying grace.
And as she whispers to the world in a voice so dark
Secrets that shes learnt from her thousands of miles
She falls to the floor, and the laughter stops
Spawn of Satan, they whisper, Angel Child.
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Re: Angel Child
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 07:54:08 PM AEST
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Wow, I enjoyed this it was really gripping. A powerful piece. I loved it all the pain and emotions were all so tangible. Keep up these amazing poems!
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Angel Child
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by roisin on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 03:38:47 AM AEST
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| another good read.....seems that this "dark poetry" has me listening to the smiths again,(last time in my late 20's)......keep writing, love your style!! rosie |
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Re: Angel Child
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by Delusions on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 03:52:22 AM AEST
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This was an awsome one... i really enjoyed it! Keep it up!
~Delusions~ |
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Re: Angel Child
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 04:41:34 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed it. It had great emotion and a nice flow. It could use some more medafores in some areas and a little less in others. |
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Re: Angel Child
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by M on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 03:08:58 AM AEST
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| Thank you lucie, i hope you know that you're beautiful too, thank you for everything you've ever done for me, i couldn't have got this far without you. the poem, as i've said before is amazing, and so true! love you, MxXx |
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Re: Angel Child
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by riverofwords on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 05:26:13 AM AEST
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well , what can i say .
i have read many poems ..but this one made me tingle ,put a tear in my eye
this was an awesome write ..i really loved everything about it
i give you a standing ovation
this is MY POEM OF THE DAY
PEACE BE Your journey
Terry |
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