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Thinking Of Only Him
Contributed by
sukalaa
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Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 03:38:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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While sitting down on a rock
Mesmerizing the scenery of the valley
I am surrounded with mountains,
The beauty of life can not be seen
Beyond the grazing land
A gentle breeze drifts in the air
Pushing my long black hair on my face
This pictured a reflection of my past life
When I responded to his gentle touch
As he pushed my hair to give me a kiss
The feeling of the green grass flourishing,
Gives me shivers with pleasure,
When he was holding me tightly in his arms
I would swirl my fingers on his curls
Only to my first love, I would
My pleasure turns to terror, as I realize,
He is not here, never with me again
I stood up, ran as fast as I could, crying with pain
Thinking of only him, every move I make
Every touch I feel, every fragrance I smell,
Thinking of only him
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sukalaa
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2005-08-03 15:38:59]
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Re: Thinking Of Only Him
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 03:41:36 PM AEST
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| A good poem, beautifull scenes, nice vision of your first love. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Thinking Of Only Him
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by Monkeybones99 on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 06:26:48 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem....like said before very vivid scenery...and a truth about the first love. |
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Re: Thinking Of Only Him
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by blackholesun on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 11:18:56 PM AEST
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| oh my god! this made me cry,sweet you got a big heart and it shows:)keep up the good work ,and never stop showing these feelings:)peace&love |
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