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Memories fortold
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 07:55:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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what life is this that i dream
screams peircing memories fortold
calling out to a crowd deaf in thier ear
lifelessly caving in me so cold
what is life when you think its a dream
hearing nothing but past viloent screams
what is life when everyday one tear to shed
what is life when you hope and pray your dead
something too shrill
and empty to save
calling it a smile
but not know what you have
and then you see the trails of blood
and you follow in fear
what is this dream that
you couldnt hear
that single shot
that peircing scream
trails of blood
horrific scene
my body lay
so very cold
i then woke up
from my memeories fortold
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Re: Memories fortold
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 08:23:42 PM AEST
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| I thought it quite good; I just wish it had more punctuation. |
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Re: Memories fortold
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 10:48:18 PM AEST
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very raw and piercing.
Powerful poem indeed, true pain felt.
Hope to you. |
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