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°°°What You Feel°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Just picture the art that lays deep in our souls...
Painted into the dreams of one,,
As you are the only one who deep inside knows....
The love that one gives,,who knows the reasons why
A picture perfect love that they only,,can give
No errors,,no flaws,,masterpiece,,is what it is
Mankind cannot touch it with mean evilness
Pure in heart is what they have,,no evil can touch
Only love of the two,,will break this spell
And true loves kiss will take them out of satans hell
Never touched ,,,always alive,,true love will be by my side
Having to hold,forever,she is,,no-one can touch
For we speak, see, and hear only eachother as one
One who loves each other,,for who we are,,in love with life of each other
Picture perfect is what you see,,,no nitemares for you and me
Love and hope is ours forever,,,
As we spend our lives in age together...
Together we grow old,,as i cherish you as you cherish the thought or me loving you
And your eyes are not blinded by the one who's by your side now are you.....
Showing tenderness,,and love that she deserves,,
Nothing can touch this love,,for its a masterpiece in motion,,thats already been in love,,and will always
And for anything to try and part it would be such that of a grain of sand blown into the wind untouched....unharmed..and unbroken
Darkness walks away from the two with its head down low ,,know it could touch a love like this,,where the light is bright in there hearts
Eye's and soul,,,
And they are the only ones that see the light for what it is and the depth of it blinds all those around them.....
Untouched,, pure in heart,,together in love,,forever
A masterpiece in love,,,
~ craig s. meeks & OreO ~
Copyright ©
OreO
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2003-01-12 18:00:00]
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Re: °°°What You Feel°°°
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 06:18:51 PM AEST
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| wonderful write from the two of you, a fantastic masterpiece |
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Re: °°°What You Feel°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 07:38:43 PM AEST
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| You two write beautiful words! great one here as are many of you both! Christina |
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Re: °°°What You Feel°°°
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by spooky on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 08:51:08 PM AEST
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| OreO,,you did a beautiful jod rewritting this masterpiece,,your friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: °°°What You Feel°°°
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by venkat on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 12:09:55 AM AEST
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| wow! OreO, My great friend, I cant find suitable words to express my joy in reading this great write. Truly you are one of the most precious jewels among our poets. Its a master piece my friend...thanks a lot..venkat |
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Re: °°°What You Feel°°°
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by nomad on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 07:48:30 AM AEST
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| A beautiful piece, OreO. Kudos to you and your friend for this wonderful write. |
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Re: °°°What You Feel°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 08:57:32 AM AEST
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| Anything you have a hand in writing is a work of art. Great write to both of you! |
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Re: °°°What You Feel°°°
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by LostDream on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 01:38:09 PM AEST
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Wonderful,beautiful,brilliant....I've got no words to describe the emotions it gave me....Thanks to you both....
Sara |
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Re: °°°What You Feel°°°
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 06:24:28 PM AEST
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| This is a very great write. Hats off to both of you. Thanx for all the great comments you've given me on my poems. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: °°°What You Feel°°°
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by darkkai on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 08:31:50 PM AEST
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| AMAZING pure rivalry that i can not compete with. keep it up OreO |
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Re: °°°What You Feel°°°
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by Opium on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 09:37:58 AM AEST
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| Oreo you make this site alive, in your comments, your presense, your friendly nature and your splendid poems! |
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Re: °°°What You Feel°°°
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Thursday, 10th April 2003 @ 11:01:15 PM AEST
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HI OREO,
YOU ARE A JEWELS,I MISS YOU ON THE SITE.
OREO I OWE YOU AN APOLOGE PLEASE FORGIVE ME.
FOR NOT STAYING IN CONTACT WITH YOU.
THIS IS A MASTER PEICE,I AGREE PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE.WITH LOVE AND RESPECT.
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