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Here With Me
Contributed by
Artemis03
on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 12:36:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In the depths of my dreams
I long for you to be, here with me.
When I wake up in the morning,
First thing my mind can do...
All it can do it think of you...
Here with me.
In a daze, in a trance, you got me hypnotized.
Lost in your eyes, your smile,
I feel like an innocent child
When I think of you, here with me.
Lustfully caught in laughter...
Beacuse with your words, my attention, you've captured.
You are so far, yet I feel your presence
I've realized love has no distance
I've embrassed your very exsistence,
Through my dreams of you...
Here with me.
Copyright ©
Artemis03
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2005-08-04 00:36:58]
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Re: Here With Me
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by xthrewmyluvawayx on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 12:53:19 AM AEST
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| aww beautiful....ive experianced feelings like those....very good! |
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Re: Here With Me
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 01:15:59 AM AEST
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So heartfelt.. Great write!
mckayla |
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Re: Here With Me
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 10:59:57 PM AEST
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I like this. It has a fresh feel compared to the endless supply of convention-filled love poems.
And I like those last three lines. Very meaningful. Well done!
Andrew
(noticing, randomly, that the last two poems on your userpage, "here with me" and "end of things", remind me of the line from The Lord of the Rings, "here with me at the end of all things".) |
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