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Art pt. 2
Contributed by
ineedanap
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Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 01:42:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Who are we
To disguise who we are?
To uphold secrets
To give into the art
Our bodies are temples
Treat them as you wish
A blank canvas soon turns
Blue to Black
Black to Red
The vicious cycle of human art
When will it end?
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ineedanap
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2005-08-04 01:42:30]
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Re: Art pt. 2
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:30:43 AM AEST
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It may not be your best, but it is certainly not bad, by any means. I too think we just need to be who we are and quit trying to fool everyone, including ourselves. I feel if you embellished on it a bit more you would be much happier with it. It could truly be a lovely poem.
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