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Alone
Contributed by
whitloveit
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Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 03:39:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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What happens when your faith in life is no longer there?
That your simple joys are taken away and left you crumbled.
No one ever there, no one seems to care,
Thats where you begin to tumble.
Deep into a empty pit,
A sad and lonely place.
Crying away as you sit,
Everything you and did and say you cant erase.
That every reason leans back to you,
And no ones there to tell you different.
Knowing now theres nothing you can do,
That the love you mailed wasnt sent.
You sit back and take it all in,
Tearing into pieces deep with in,
Wishing it all soon will end.
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2005-08-04 03:39:27]
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Re: Alone
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by Erualaitalmarea on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 06:06:43 PM AEST
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Very moving especially
"That the love you mailed wasn't sent"
I have been somewhere like that, and if no one cares for you I do, I understand. Hang in there :) |
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