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Exit
Contributed by
bluesbaby811
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Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:49:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Flashing,blinking
Bright and Twinkling
Never know where the exit is
NO NO
The exits far away
A journey for another day
And you never know
Where to turn or where to go
Im trapped im stuck
What the *****
Cant find the exit
***** it
Its gone
What did i do wrong?
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2005-08-04 14:49:03]
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Re: Exit
(User Rating: 1 )
by je2ica3 on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:53:54 PM AEST
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| it totally makes since..its like out of know where some one takes something away from you like your freedom and theirs no reason why...well great write |
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Re: Exit
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 03:02:02 PM AEST
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| I understand this poem it makes sence, you said what the f, you can not find the exit f it because it is gone and you asked yourself what did you do wrong. It makes sence. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Exit
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by mand on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 03:19:47 PM AEST
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| i like it, ive been there many times... it made me laugh |
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