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My Death
Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 08:58:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Be nice to me
My death is coming soon
I know now
That it will be at noon
Its the tricks that people play
That makes us die
I am a victim
And soon I will fly
I will fly high
And free!
Up into the sky
Where no one can bother me!
Up to the place with no worries
Or stress
I will go up there
With all the rest!
Ill look down on you
And say with a sigh
Im fine! Im happy here!
So please dont cry.
But you wont stop
I can already tell
Because you miss me so much
And I miss you as well.
But up here
I am fine
But Ill always be yours
And you will always be mine!
Listen to me
I love you
So dont forget
But if you do
Take out a picture
Of me
Then,
Youll see
That Im always there
With you
So no matter what
Remember
I love you!
Copyright ©
misunderstood_gurl
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2005-08-04 20:58:32]
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Re: My Death
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by Sherah on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:00:49 PM AEST
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| Nice writing!! Keep up the good work.... |
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Re: My Death
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:20:15 AM AEST
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Very nice writing and so sad.
you did good on this piece. |
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Re: My Death
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by HiddenDeath999 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:06:28 PM AEST
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| nice ^^ |
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Re: My Death
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 10:19:47 PM AEST
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nice write...sad, but good. i enjoyed reading it... and i want to go, yes, but i don't want you to go. please, try to say no and don't leave me in this f***ed-up world by myself... lol... great write, using the title first turned it out well, good job, keep up the great work!
~sprints |
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