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I hope you will see
Contributed by
ineedanap
on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:07:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I know it hurt you when i said
I would no longer be your friend
Till all of this comes to an end
All i ment was that i needed time to mend
Mentally i was not alright
Mentally i was unable to fight
the urges that my body ached for
That's why i could not talk to you anymore
It was for the good of me and you
So that hopefully we could make it through
The times of hate and despair
The times when we just didn't care
I know everything is going to be fine
As long as you stay in line
Away from the things you used to do
And spend some time on just you
Someday you'll understand
To why i made this command
"Don't talk to me until you stop,
And when i know no more blood will drop"
This was not easy for me
So i only hoped that you would see
I didn't mean to cause any hurt
I didn't intend to leave you in the dirt
All i wanted to do
Was to help you make it through
Copyright ©
ineedanap
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2005-08-04 23:07:27]
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Re: I hope you will see
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:34:05 PM AEST
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Very sad but u r a good friend for standing your ground. U have turned a major curve for taking responsibity for your own mistakes but trying to help your friend. U will heel and be strong.
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Re: I hope you will see
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:42:38 AM AEST
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| It hurts when somebody says I will no longer be your friend. I really did not understand the poem though. |
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Re: I hope you will see
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by RebelRose on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 05:23:11 PM AEST
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you stode ur ground very cool did ur friend stop? and ur a great poetry writer
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