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I'm a Fake
Contributed by
killingmehslowly
on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:50:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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I'm sick of this smart girl act,
(It's fake)
Tired of pretending I have tact,
(I only did it for your sake)
Bored with being a good little girl,
(Time for that mold to break)
I'm shallow, worried about that one hair that curls,
(A habit I can't seem to shake)
I try to hide my emotions, but fail,
(My tears are so numerous you could fill a lake)
And why must I flirt with every male?
(Perverted am I, both sleeping and awake)
Witty and charming,
(With words as deadly as a snake)
Pretty and smart,
(Amazing what a mask can make)
Kill me, hate me,
(Help me, save me -- I'm so fake)
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killingmehslowly
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2005-08-05 01:50:22]
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Re: I'm a Fake
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:59:20 AM AEST
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we all seem to hide part of us for someone else, good write..
tasha |
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Re: I'm a Fake
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by savedbydeath on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:05:12 AM AEST
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| awesome write,no one is perfect not even using a mask to hide the real us,its ok,i dont hate u,and if ppl do hate u its probably bc they're jealous,dont worry u'll realize ur just living a normal life as soon as u see others living the double lives as well,good write keep up the great job!! |
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Re: I'm a Fake
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by Jane_Doe on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:29:19 AM AEST
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| I liked the formatting for this. It was very artistic. It's a sad thing to write but your emotions are portrayed so well. Nice write. |
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Re: I'm a Fake
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by davemaps on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:31:12 AM AEST
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| good poem no one is perfect good rymes |
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Re: I'm a Fake
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by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 10:50:32 AM AEST
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| i like the formatting in this and the way you bluntly face your problem. good write. |
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Re: I'm a Fake
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by jmpy84 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:08:19 PM AEST
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| nicely done |
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