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ill never be perfect
Contributed by
all_that_i_can_be
on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:32:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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ill never be perfect
i dont get straight A's
im a drug addict
and i drink for the taste
i dont know what i need
cant say what i want
sometimes i bleed,
there's scars ill never flaunt
im so sick of crying
there must be a way out
im fed up with lying
dont know what im about
this has to end soon
it all has to end
im no longer immune
ill break if i bend
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Re: ill never be perfect
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:43:42 AM AEST
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We wern't meant to be perfect.
Sad but good writing.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: ill never be perfect
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by Jane_Doe on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:44:10 AM AEST
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| Great rhyming. I liked it! |
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Re: ill never be perfect
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by Zandria on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 07:36:14 AM AEST
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Aspiring to be perfect is a heck of a weight to place on your own shoulders.
Could very well be worse than trying to live up to an outsiders perfections.
Good write, easy to relate. |
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