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My wish
Contributed by
colmaster
on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 08:39:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Some wish for the wealth,
Wealthy till their last breath,
Cruising around the planet,
Getting hold of everything they want;
The luxury and the jive
And the pleasures life has to give
Some wish to be superstars,
Role models to masters.
Wish to light the way
To earn honor of the day,
The lights, screen and the fame
And the thighs the world can frame.
Somes wishes are hollow
All they endure is sorrow,
Glad for what life has to give or take,
Their deeds are fake,
Chameleons and snakes to the world,
And bring destruction to the world.
How amazing! A single wish keeps my days bright,
Holds my dreams tight,
Gives me inspiration
To achieve my ambition.
A wish so pure and true,
I wish to be loved by you.
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colmaster
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2005-08-05 08:39:42]
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Re: My wish
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by Archie on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:26:27 AM AEST
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| That is a great wish and you "framed" it well |
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Re: My wish
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by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 10:32:03 AM AEST
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| i like how you compared the wishes in detail, it helps us get more involved in your poetry. good job. |
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Re: My wish
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by vibes2go on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 11:18:22 AM AEST
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| what a gem ... and a pure desire. great write. |
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Re: My wish
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:10:45 PM AEST
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| Such a nicely flowing, peaceful and very truthful write. I love this idea. It made a wonderful poem. |
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Re: My wish
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by jmpy84 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:24:11 PM AEST
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| truely a great work of art |
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