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Regret
Contributed by
anitajames
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Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 03:35:56 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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I was there
you did not see me.
My heart was broken
you cannot kill me.
Maybe you want to, you may even try
But my strength is inside
not in being your bride.
Copyright ©
anitajames
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2005-08-05 15:35:56]
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Re: Regret
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 03:40:48 PM AEST
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so sad...its sweet in the sense of sarcasam gone wild bleeding in white...
please comment on my work too
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Re: Regret
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by colinbaker62 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 03:48:34 PM AEST
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Bittersweet implications for sure.
Colin |
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Re: Regret
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by Archie on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 03:59:37 PM AEST
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| Great words of courage and strength. Your poem and it's meaning flowed very well. |
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Re: Regret
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by jmpy84 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:07:03 PM AEST
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| powerful words great job |
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Re: Regret
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by mand on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:58:13 PM AEST
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| i enojyed reading it, it all goes together really well |
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Re: Regret
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 10:45:00 PM AEST
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I hear the hurt and pain but I also hear that you won the jackpot by losing. Stay strong.
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Re: Regret
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 03:21:53 AM AEST
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I like your short ones. You do them well, you don't waste any words (I do...), saying just what you want to. Well done.
I'm glad the fight is still there.
Take care.
David |
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