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Glass Eyes
Contributed by
Pyrofungus
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Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:03:51 PM in AEST
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Your glass eyes were always meant to break,
Break outta their comfort zone and travel a bit and see.
But what has been done has protected them behind a pale mirror
Disguising whats on the inside
Only showing the obvious scene as shown to a rock beneath your feet.
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Pyrofungus
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2005-08-05 16:03:51]
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Re: Glass Eyes
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 02:00:25 AM AEST
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| hmmm interesting."But what has been done has protected them behind a pale mirror" i like this line the idea is unique. nice write |
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Re: Glass Eyes
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by allowanceofthoughts on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:36:11 PM AEST
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| I have read a few of yours and they are very interesting. Words and lines I feel could fit into music. Nicely Done! |
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Re: Glass Eyes
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:22:53 PM AEST
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it reminds me of how i used to be
hiding but always wanting to see
i am not sure if that was what you meant by the words
but that is what it made me feel
i like your work
-->Rae |
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