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Thank You
Contributed by
O7NeVeS
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Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:01:05 PM in AEST
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Thank you for dancing with me
For getting my number and calling me
For e-mailing and making me laugh
For making time go by so fast
Thanks for seeing me however many days straight
Coming into my life mustve been fate
Thanks for being there during my rough times
Youre the sun in my life that always shines
Thank you for dealing with my emotional mess
Thank you for being one of the best
Thank you for caring and for your love
Thank you for making me soar high above
Thanks for knowing exactly what to say
Especially in times when I just want you to stay
Thanks for fighting and for being a man
Just want you to know Im your biggest fan
Thank you for everything you have done
Including the times you must play with your gun
Now that youve left just know this
Not a second goes by that youre not missed
Copyright ©
O7NeVeS
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2005-08-05 21:01:05]
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Re: Thank You
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:35:31 PM AEST
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WOW!! I think this is easily one of your best poems, it's absolutely wonderful...With strong emotions comes great inspiration and you have proved that with this one. I loved every bit of it, the lines, the rhymes, you name it....I hope to see more like this from you, great job :)
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Re: Thank You
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:44:26 PM AEST
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A beautiful, touching and heartfelt write. You've expressed urself so well in this. May God keep ur man safe in Iraq and bring him back to u safe and sound.
Hugs,
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Re: Thank You
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by Mild_Tempest on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:44:39 PM AEST
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| That's so good, I loved all of it! Great write |
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Re: Thank You
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by usmc2534 on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 06:43:18 PM AEST
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Well babe, I think I must agree with Curtis C. I definitely think this is one of, if not the best you've written. I feel so fortunate, priviledged and blessed to be the subject of your poems. I love you so much babe. See you soon. Bye.
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