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Arise
Contributed by
Iwan
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Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 04:07:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You understand, I cant comprehend
Another mistreatment of an undeserving
Forgotten and thrown, I just want a hole
To keep these haters at bay
Buried alive under layers of lies
Im not lost in sound this time
I don't want a trace of me
To be left behind
Set aside the free will
Of human emotion
And keep on scratching till your soul remains
An empty cage of dire reflection
All down to you and your raging afflictions
If I could crush you in my hands, Id laugh and smile
At what pitiful flesh youve become
For a purpose unknown, Ill raise my hands
And choke all the faults from this life
Smiling away, I stand on my own
Now youre the one screaming alone
Smiling away, I stand on my own
Now youre the one screaming alone
Arise mine enemy, for in my eyes
The sickness you speak is too much to define
Arise mine enemy, for in your time
The dark that you bring will end your life
Copyright ©
Iwan
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2005-08-06 16:07:43]
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Re: Arise
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by Archie on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 04:11:27 PM AEST
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| That was a good write. Your revenge theme was very good. |
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Re: Arise
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by In2thetwilightzone on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 04:48:31 PM AEST
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| god i love revenge, but when you do it you have to get it perfect, and you captured that accute, pure sence of perfection in your writing, and i admire your skill for doing so. i have just split up with my boyfriend whom cheated on me with a very close friend, im more upset with her than him, i should have seen it coming in that low life pathetic player, but for her to stab me in the back, the power and fury of this poem made me rediscover that anger and feeling of decieving, and i could only wish such a fate and wrath as much as this poem gives out upon her, i hate her, i wish she was damned xxxxxxJazzxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: Arise
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by mom11159 on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:10:23 PM AEST
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A very emotioal poem with a lot of rage and anger your emotions displayed so very well in this poem an excellent write
Cathy |
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