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You
Contributed by
syenn0512
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Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 12:22:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You have always been in my heart...
Now and forever,
The smile on your face....
Melt my heart away,
Your funny little jokes...
Brighten my gloomy days,
As time passes by,we driffed farther...
How could this happen?
Im lonely and lost...
When youre not around,
I need you every single day....
But you pretend not to know
It hurt so much...
When you just dont seem to care.
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syenn0512
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2005-08-07 00:22:39]
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Re: You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 12:38:21 AM AEST
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Holy crap,its like you read my mind,lol.I can relate to this so much and understand you.I loved the way you expressed your feelings.Anyhow,don't give up!t/c.
love,
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Re: You
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by LickaLolipop on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:46:12 AM AEST
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Yeah, you read my mind too.
That's exactly how I'm feeling today.
And everyday I wake up,
Time kills the pain, keep your head up.
Good write,
Keep up the good work :) |
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Re: You
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by Ineedanap on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 02:40:57 AM AEST
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Wow, soft but packed with lots of emotion. Very delicate. Well done.
Brooke |
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