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SLEEPING AWAKE!
Contributed by
Momen
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Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:45:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Concealing all these little lies
Far deep down inside
So many things are missing here
When I was put together
Lying awake in my room
Staring up at the some what doom
Waiting for this thing to open
Whats the point Im still unspoken
Waiting for it to come back here
But still I know youll never understand
The ***** Ive seen it cuts deep down
But doesn't compare to the unlawful sound
Im hiding hurt that burns inside
Which only fills their selfish pride
Ive had to push myself inside
And build a wall I could hide behind
Ive been places in my mind
They couldnt even begin to find
Im in a place theyll never see
Beginning to scream silently
Sleeping awake choking on a dream
Listening loudly to those silent screams
On my knees alive but dead
Look at the invisible blood Ive bleed
I know Im dead but whos to say
This is hell forever Ill stay
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Momen
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2005-08-07 01:45:15]
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Re: SLEEPING AWAKE!
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by emystar on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:52:02 AM AEST
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Sad but well written.
huggs,
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Re: SLEEPING AWAKE!
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by Ineedanap on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 02:11:48 AM AEST
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Good. I thought it seemed a bit slow in the beginning but it definietly picked up at the end. Good write
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