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wishful thinking
Contributed by
boy_in_blue
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Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 02:40:00 AM in AEST
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i made a wish upon a star,
and wondered where you really are.
can you see the stars i see?
do you wonder where i might be?
in the dark i think of you
hoping wishes can come true
someday i hope we'll be together
until then seems like forever
so until then, i'll just write
and then i'll dream of you tonight
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Re: wishful thinking
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by WordPoet on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 04:49:58 PM AEST
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| Longing, loving desire often touches us in the most wonderful and sometimes tragic of ways. May your love be fulfilled in one way or another. Keep up the poetry, it's looking good. |
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Re: wishful thinking
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by wordsy on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 09:00:54 AM AEST
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ah, I see your other poems have been posted. And again another well worded weaving.
wordsy. |
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Re: wishful thinking
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by barbara312 on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 05:27:07 PM AEST
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| Dreams do come true .So keep dreaming on that star your love will find you where ever you are. |
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Re: wishful thinking
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 10:24:14 AM AEST
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Wishful thinking
1)If you don't cross the street she'll probably never see you.
2)You can do an awful lot to improve your chances.
3)Don't judge every girl by your first impression.
4)stop wishing your life away
5) Oh what the heck you probably won't take any notice anyway |
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Re: wishful thinking
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 02:27:45 PM AEST
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Iggy, this is truly beautiful!!! Thank you for sharing this with us.. I hope all your dreams come true for you...
Jenni |
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Re: wishful thinking
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 07:56:07 PM AEST
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| beautiful......love this:) |
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