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Cry, Child
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 11:58:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Cry silently, dear child,
The tears will ease your pain,
And know it's never wrong to cry,
If you need to cry again.
I know it's not easy to do,
But maybe you'll find peace,
Just cry and cry, dear child,
Let tears give you release.
Speak your woes to someone,
And don't lock them away,
Know someone out there's praying,
For your fear to stop today.
Just let it all out and notice,
How the crying makes you feel,
Because until you truly do it,
You will never really heal.
Listen to me, child,
I know of what I say,
'Cause I'm looking in the mirror,
I'm talking to myself today.
And I know it's hard advice to take,
But I know one day you will,
For looking in the mirror,
I can see the tears begin to spill.
And it will be okay again one day,
Just hold on tight to hope,
For the angels here have saved you,
And taught you how to cope.
Cry silently, dear child,
These tears will ease the pain,
And maybe oneday very soon,
You'll be yourself again.
Copyright ©
lostinmyself
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2005-08-07 11:58:06]
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Re: Cry, Child
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 12:03:11 PM AEST
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This is a really good write Phil. I however do not agree with this line:
Speak your woes to no one
how will you get better if you do that?
Keep writing |
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Re: Cry, Child
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 02:36:21 PM AEST
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Very well written....
I hope things will get better for yas soon.
May your pain ease and you be surrounded by happiness.
huggssss,
Nats. |
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Re: Cry, Child
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by mytento1 on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 03:04:16 PM AEST
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| I like it.........I feel your pain and your desire to heal. Keep writing. Writing about your pain will help your healing. Good rhyme. |
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Re: Cry, Child
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 04:53:58 PM AEST
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The talk, the tears, the writing are all very therapeutic, Philly. Don't be afraid to pour your soul into anothers cup. Just getting it out helps, the tears release some stress, and poets always get some respite just writing it out. Love and strength.
Rita |
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Re: Cry, Child
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by Archie on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 05:11:52 PM AEST
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| Great advice to yourself as well as to others. This is a very good poem. |
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Re: Cry, Child
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by manic_x_pressive on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 06:25:35 PM AEST
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| this one really tickled my emotions. i had a really hard childhood and i remember the point at which i could no longer cry. and it sucked. after a few years of not crying, i was hospitalized for bi-polar disorder, so good advice for anyone to follow, if you can cry make it a river. |
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Re: Cry, Child
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by Nazmythian on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 09:47:45 PM AEST
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Phil, I couldn't say anything that would in any way add to what you have here. This is good advise if the addressee listens to the addressor. Listen to yourself, Phil. I do believe talking may help but you gotta find the right person to talk to and that can be difficult sometimes.
Nazzy ~
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Re: Cry, Child
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 09:21:37 AM AEST
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Phil, i have no words for this. You made everyone feel every word/sentence of this poem.
Hmm i have nothing else to add but if you ever need to talk, im always here.
Hugs,
Jane xoxox |
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Re: Cry, Child
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:05:44 PM AEST
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Awwww philly hugs
Thats a very emotional piece.
You ever need to talk i am here for you hon.
love and hugs |
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Re: Cry, Child
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:44:31 PM AEST
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Gosh that person in the mirror is just so dam smart!!! Of course they are a reflection of a truely awsome person so I'm not surprised.
Oh so well written Philly girl....hugs!! |
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Re: Cry, Child
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 10:30:39 PM AEST
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It's been a while... since a poem has hit this hard. This is... this is thunder rolling across a bright blue sky, Philly and it is as beautiful as you.
~Snem~
(who loves you, too)
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Re: Cry, Child
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 08:06:42 AM AEST
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How many times can you astonish me with your growth as a poet and a person?
At least one more I guess.
Stitch |
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Re: Cry, Child
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by lillyjane on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 09:51:35 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem, if you dont cry it bottles up inside you and the pain never goes. xx |
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Re: Cry, Child
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by SPSM on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 02:56:30 PM AEST
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| This is so beautiful. I enjoyed every line. Thank you. |
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