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Freedom's Lurking
Contributed by
ScreenSaver77
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Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:31:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I exist with an oceans worth of salt
The cold blue running deeply in my veins
An inconsistent mass of sadness lies inside my vault
No silky shores in my domains
The cold strong currents dragging me into the reefs
Entangled inside this never ending maze
My freedom has been stolen by these feeless wicked thieves
A dark shadow passing me in my daze
Natures here; to take my pain away
Curiously circling my trust
Unmerciful jaws with nothing to say
Freedoms lurking inside my dust
Copyright ©
ScreenSaver77
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2005-08-07 13:31:48]
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Re: Freedom's Lurking
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by Urizen on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 03:45:25 PM AEST
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| I liked this a lot of great imagry, you've got a lot of talent, thank you |
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