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Love?
Contributed by
anitajames
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Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 06:15:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Not all gifts are golden
some are filled with rust.
With each tongue inserted
and each hungry thrust.
I know you don't love me
you feel obligated.
Is it really worth all the times we've hated?
If I were to free you,
would you come alive?
I know the answer...
I'm sure WE would thrive.
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anitajames
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2005-08-07 18:15:44]
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Re: Love?
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by Archie on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:17:20 PM AEST
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| Some of what you said in your poem is true for many relationships. I can relate to this and it is well written even if written in anger. |
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Re: Love?
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:19:13 PM AEST
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ahhh so true....I like the stanza at the front
"Not all gifts are golden
some are filled with rust.
With each tongue inserted
and each hungry thrust."....those words are very raw and honest......
i like your conveyence of suspicison and hurt...well done.'
Good write.
Hope to you. |
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Re: Love?
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:41:22 AM AEST
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"Is it really worth all the times we've hated?"
Really cool lines, makes one think.
Well done.
Take care.
David |
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