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MY QUEEN
Contributed by
Bruce
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Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:45:06 AM in AEST
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MY QUEEN
There she is before me
her Majesty in real
Her radiant beauty showing
her love, is what I feel
I adore this lovely lady
MY QUEEN, she surely is
How very lucky I am
to hear others say, she is his
She rules our kingdom daily
with all her charm and grace
In our palace together
there is no better place
This beautiful charming woman
a queen, in every way
Can turn, any dark cloudy sky
into a bright, sun shining day
Everything about her
makes her, a very special queen
One to be admired
and she surely is, my dream
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2005-08-08 01:45:06]
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Re: MY QUEEN
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 03:59:32 AM AEST
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i read this two hours ago and just when i was gonna comment got zapped of line so I try again.
I she's your Qween that that makes u King.
Very beautifull.
huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: MY QUEEN
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:10:03 PM AEST
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awww what a lovely write you write .
well done |
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Re: MY QUEEN
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by bernard2 on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:48:29 PM AEST
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Can turn, any dark cloudy sky
into a bright, sun shining day
This really caught my eye. Great poem I like it bernard2 |
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Re: MY QUEEN
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 05:31:07 PM AEST
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This is a very lovely tribute so that special someone in your life that makes it worth living day to day. One day I will find that again. Hope yours continues for a long time. For without a Queen your kingdom would fall.
Rita |
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Re: MY QUEEN
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by Stew on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 06:20:26 PM AEST
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this is very beautiful. I love the title! that is what caught my eye!
stew |
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Re: MY QUEEN
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:06:30 PM AEST
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beautiful write! and amazing at the same time. as you say you are lucky to have her, i'm sure she's saying she's lucky to have you! great write and hold onto your QUEEN! great write, keep it up!
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Re: MY QUEEN
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:10:25 AM AEST
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A very loving, romantic ode..
it's fabulous Bruce-
B |
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Re: MY QUEEN
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by paul_x_walker on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:21:00 PM AEST
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| good write |
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