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invisable
Contributed by
eternallybroken
on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 04:27:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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lay upon your thoughts now
tangled and mistaken, enternally foresaken
walk a path, when they want a run, a run from you, all day long
so you break and you bleed, you stay and they keep
you fight all in your head, insecurities and dread
one day your ok, the next is dismay
restless sleeper, you dream of something much deeper then this world has shown
..then he went away, while you waited, but couldn't pray
trapped under a cool mist of stinging conversation, it wets your face, while the wind bites
your embrace..
well farewell wind, you did nothing but slap my face
disgrace disgrace, happy is your only face
but wishing for something, is never in your trace
circles you sweep, and live this way night and day
to give up is cure, but draining as you grasp that little sanity on a needle-thread
to give up, almost, express myself in dialect, not much to do, but continue and hopefully
look forward to another sunny day, happiness to cure
what i feel like lately...
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2005-08-08 04:27:16]
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Re: invisable
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by SiLeNtxxThunder on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 11:58:35 PM AEST
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| this poem has great rhythm, keep up the good work! :) |
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