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Ode Of a Distressed One
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 10:38:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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No words can surmise
How my saddened heart does feel
The guilt so harsh and rampant
Oh the sorrow of my ordeal
Appearing to be righteous
Yesterday, when the season was fine
When I befitted holiness
When of faith I did incline
Now I am deserving of your rod
Worthy of eternal pain
Condemnation rightly due
Of the sinful works I do obtain
This dark hour does frighten
Oh am I the devils new seed?
Or am I downhearted, repentant
Of your majestic voice to heed
Dismal torture of the minds eye
Shattering with every reckless piece
Sins overwhelming and redundant
Of these abusive thoughts please cease
God I forever plead
Of my soul please forgive
Send my errors afar
So I may taste peace and live
Can thou envision my heart?
In this godly state of sadness
Please bury my wrong deeply
And favor my eyes with gladness
I beckon for thee
Heal my grotesque ways.
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-08-08 22:38:53]
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Re: Ode Of a Distressed One
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by justme03 on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 10:44:40 PM AEST
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wow i REALLY enjoyed this poem
the emotion was felt so clearly.
just one thing tho. in the last line the word grotesque seems a bit odd to me but im not sure why. all in all tho i loved this
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Re: Ode Of a Distressed One
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 11:24:03 PM AEST
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A very strong praYER. So taouching and gives gives us new starts with each brand new day.
Hang in there and u will be blessed.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Ode Of a Distressed One
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by 68birdls1 on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 11:55:41 PM AEST
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| so in depth and... i guess the only word to describe it is wow! |
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Re: Ode Of a Distressed One
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:55:31 AM AEST
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very intense
awsome write |
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Re: Ode Of a Distressed One
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:40:08 PM AEST
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| This was written ver well. God would never turn away a heart like the one in this poem |
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Re: Ode Of a Distressed One
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:16:10 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, while sad and so innocent lovely . . .
Ben |
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Re: Ode Of a Distressed One
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by ebooibo on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:25:49 AM AEST
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| thats deep yo damn it brings power 2 my heart keep it coming... |
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Re: Ode Of a Distressed One
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by ebooibo on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:26:26 AM AEST
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| thats deep yo damn it brings power 2 my heart keep it coming... |
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Re: Ode Of a Distressed One
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 11:09:57 PM AEST
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Oh my Rach-
you've a bit of "the days of yore"
here..
It's deep yet simple..
I only regret I hadn't read it sooner..
(not liked too much here nowadays-)
Yours-
B |
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