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Oceans to me,,,,
Contributed by
spooky
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Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
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misty breeze from Oceans front,,
Oceans sprays,,water colors,,
colors of rainbows,,is what you see,,
this blanket of mist,,is what you feel,,
Waves of white,,water of blue,,
sand beneath your feet, they'll cover you,,
beautiful fish,,
is what you'll see ,
gliding along the Oceans feet,,
colors they show,,
are beautiful to see,,
Oceans colors for you and me,,
Engulfed by the water,,
as it holds you tight,,
embraced by feelings,,
in this watery sight,,
I'll hold you tight,,
in this watery sight,,
for the water will take you away,,
from my sight,,
I'll never let go,,
as long as your near,,
I'll hold you close,,
so don't you fear,,
Water is dangerous,,
this i'll say to you,,
I'll hold you tight,,
for you are my life,,
The Ocean can be dangerous,,
but man can be too,,
never let your guard down,,
or they engulf you too,,
hold on to what you have heard,,
and believe what i say,,
both can destroy,,
but not this day,,,
I wont let them ,,engulf you too,,
you have me to comfort you,,
hold on to what you believe,,
someday soon,,the ocean will be for you,,
craig s. meeks
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Re: Oceans to me,,,,
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by OreO on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 11:28:05 AM AEST
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I hear you speak and talk to me
With words of wisdom and love i see
You share the beauty deep within your soul
My beautiful friend i feel you, this you know...
How beautiful you describe the ocean to me..
One day i have the faith i too will see..
you truly are amazing Craig....thank you my beautiful friend..the one that knows.....one in both on the wind blows....
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Re: Oceans to me,,,,
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 04:58:06 PM AEST
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This is truly beautiful, Craig... I loved it....
sigh....... makes me feel so peaceful...
Jenni |
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Re: Oceans to me,,,,
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 05:47:06 PM AEST
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