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Abyss of Mystery
Contributed by
trixxx
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Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:25:56 AM in AEST
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Troubled anxiety and uncertain eventuality,
Blind only to that which is ahead
A shadowy consciousness meanders
Through fields of unceremonious untruths
But not lies
This cart-wheeling stone, teetering
On the borders of insanity
Guided only by a red flag,
Flapping in winds of change
This barren rock-wall of careless enigma
Battered by rains of conviction
And dwarfed only by ruins
Of statues once great and stories once told
The grey darkness is a comfort to me, though
Like hopeful, pointless morality
I prepare only for that which i can,
But most of everything is unknown
In this cauldron of comforting calamity
This abyss of mystery
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trixxx
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2005-08-09 03:25:56]
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Re: Abyss of Mystery
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:38:30 AM AEST
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A very unique write.
Great job.
huggs,
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Re: Abyss of Mystery
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:18:27 AM AEST
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| well, in its beauty I am lost; meandering .. a dimwit to words. |
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Re: Abyss of Mystery
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:05:14 PM AEST
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man this poems deep! i love the way u used all of the big words, it gives ur poem a higher meaning or respect if u will.. anyways great write!!
Jenni xxoo |
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