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prisoner. prisoner.
Contributed by
xbleedingheart
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Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:42:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You used to tell me a million lies
About how death was just a word,
An idea created to set fear in us
You made me believe that nothing could touch me
Or hurt me.
You created a wall around me
And taught me not feel emotions
While hatred gave symptoms of headaches
You fed me poison words
And I never knew anything else
Because you were all I had
And we sit down together
And you change my good memories in pain
Everything I believe to be good is bad
Escape was just a thought
You never let me have
Copyright ©
xbleedingheart
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2005-08-09 10:42:05]
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Re: prisoner. prisoner.
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:32:13 AM AEST
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| interesting write. nice job.. |
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Re: prisoner. prisoner.
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:42:15 AM AEST
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this is very straightforward and is something that a lot of people allow themselves to take part in. It's very raw and well written too.
I especially like the last three lines.. they went together really well
thanks much for sharing a most honest write.
dw |
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