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My Mistake
Contributed by
Writting_Fever
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Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:17:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I made a mistake,
I know it's true,
Please try to forgive me,
Believe me, I love you,
I'm a determinded girl,
I know you can't see,
But I will show you now,
How sorry I can be,
I want to be with you,
I know I don't deserve it,
But if you give me one more chance,
I will make your time worth it,
You hate me,
I bet you hate him,
For what I've done,
For what I did,
I can't change the past,
I can't make it go away,
All I know is I hate it,
And that's all I can say,
I want to be in your arms,
With you and me only,
Caught in the moment,
But I'm lost and lonely,
I see you in the hall,
With all of your friends,
All I can do is stare,
Now my life officially ends,
They flirt with you,
I try not to look,
But you don't understand,
With you, I'm so hooked,
You think I'm over you,
You don't know the half,
If you only knew how I felt,
I want to change my past,
If we never talk,
I'll understand,
But I dont' want it like that,
All I want it your hand,
I miss your eyes,
And your funny walk,
I miss your laugh,
The way you talk,
Believe me it's true,
I think I'm in love with you.
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Re: My Mistake
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by anitajames on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:33:31 PM AEST
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Bittersweet, regret, and love...
This brings back memories.
Good write. |
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Re: My Mistake
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by jmpy84 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:43:28 PM AEST
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| i could really feel this one great write |
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Re: My Mistake
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by twisted_dreams on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 01:30:16 PM AEST
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| Great write... that is an awesome poem.. and it worked for mica too!!!... keep up the good work u are very talented! |
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Re: My Mistake
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by shaydie_lady on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 03:49:34 PM AEST
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You are so awesome Sarah
keep up the good work
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