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All alone
Contributed by
juggalette_chick666pk
on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 04:58:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sometimes I feel alone,
Out of place and unloved,
With no one there to help,
With no one there to love.
People come and go,
Never staying for very long,
Why wont they stay with me?
This I'll never know.
sometimes I feel alone,
wont someone come to stay?
To tell me things will be alright,
That this will go away?
I sit and wait for someone that will care,
That will help me through this day,
That will call my on the phone,
And say they're on there way.
Some times I feel alone,
I lay here in the dark,
And wonder why they all left me,
Left me all alone.
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2005-08-09 16:58:30]
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Re: All alone
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by jmpy84 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 06:35:30 PM AEST
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| i think we all feel that way some times good job |
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Re: All alone
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:29:47 PM AEST
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| you had a pretty good rhythm going in this, and i think that seeing the repetitious nature and the rhythm, i think this would make a good song. |
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Re: All alone
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by SylviaWalters on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 03:42:39 AM AEST
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| I agree with the person who said most people feel like this sometimes. It explains so much. Well done. |
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