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I Will Always Love You
Contributed by
sbhottie288
on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 05:25:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i love you
and you loved me
but now im blue
and i try to see
i feel like i could die
just take that gun
and begin to fly
i cant run
its time go
my time is up
but they say whoa
and what sup?
i love you kier
forever together
it was so clear
just like the weather
but now its blue
and i am too
i wanted you
you knew it was true
our love is fading
to me it seems
now im persuading
my dreams so i dont scream
i walk around
saying im fine
i feel like a clown
thats only nine
i cant hide how i feel
for you know this too
i was ready to kneel
and to say i do
i guess what im trying to say
is no matter how mean i seem
i want you to stay
i dont want to scream
im tired of crying
and feeling alone
im only lying
and now its shown
i love you kier
i will miss you madly
but please dont shed a tear
but i must go sadly
best friends for now
i hope this work
maybe even get me to say wow
even if i am a jerk
i love you kier
please dont forget
im ready to steer
back to where we were when we met
i wont pick up that knife
and i wont grab my neck
i will stay in this life
and i wont be a wreck
i want to wait
til you are ready
i wont want to date
i dont want to have another freddie
i want you and only you
but if i want that i must wait
if you only knew
that when we met it was fate
goodbye for now
i'll talk to you later
i wont raise a brow
i wont be a hater
good luck with what every you do
and your best friend is back
so please dont say we're threw
and lets make a pack
friends forever
maybe more
dont say never
lets walk through that new door
Copyright ©
sbhottie288
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2005-08-09 17:25:53]
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Re: I Will Always Love You
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 06:30:42 PM AEST
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this is a good poem, but also kinda sad.
it's good you don't want to kill your-self.
i like the postive glow at the end of this.
keep up the good work!
oh! ... and thanks for the comment you left on my poem too... |
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