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Just A Dream
Contributed by
sbhottie288
on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 06:26:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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im sitting here
trying to find way
as i start to tear
im not stray
the blade in one hand
the pills in the other
this i didnt plan
i say goodbye to my brother
the razor cuts the wrist
the blood starts to seep
i clench my fist
as i start to weep
i fall to the ground
and i start to bawl
i found a picture
of us all
covered in blood
i met my match
i hear the thud
and it looks like a scratch
the blade keeps moving
cut after cut
i wish i was proving
that i wasnt a nut
my eyes start to close
i can barely hear
the one who matters the most
will cry more then a tear
im am hurting
therefore i quit
im tired of your flirting
this is what you get
im forever gone
im goin to hell
i wont see another dawn
but i try to yell
i wake up and cry
i start to scream
but then i sigh
it was only a dream
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2005-08-09 18:26:30]
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Re: Just A Dream
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 06:48:27 PM AEST
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| Strong poem that flowed nicely. Christopher. |
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Re: Just A Dream
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:18:33 PM AEST
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| nice way to feel i hope you find yourself |
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Re: Just A Dream
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by ebooibo on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:27:27 AM AEST
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| thats deep yo damn it brings power 2 my heart keep it coming... |
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