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Pretending
Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:01:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm trying to tell you
I'm not the happy little gurl ya'll know
I was just pretending
....Just putting on a show
I didnt want you to worry
Or try to help me out
But i really didn't think you cared
Now I know this without a doubt
You're always yelling
And calling my name
You tell me that having me
Is a family shame
Now im starting to see
]That you were right
I'm a worthless, pathetic, loser,
That can't see the light
You hurt me so much
With everything you say
And I can't take it anymore
What's the price i gotta pay?
You're tearing me apart
And you've broken me inside
Now all of my feeling
I have to hide
I hide them
And i don't let anyone see
'Cause in someone elses eyes
Pityful, is something I do not want to be
It's already bad enough
And i dont need to let people know
I just hurt so much inside
And i could never let that show!
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misunderstood_gurl
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2005-08-09 21:01:19]
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Re: Pretending
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:05:57 PM AEST
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| well i hope poetry makes you feel better like it does me nice write |
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Re: Pretending
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by discantbelife on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:11:12 PM AEST
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| Nice write...two thumps up!! |
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Re: Pretending
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:18:52 PM AEST
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| i would have to say what i like most about your writings is the realness you put into it. it doesnt seem like you just write stories, you write about life. |
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Re: Pretending
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by sprinter27 on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 04:24:37 PM AEST
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oh, sad, but great write! and don't worry, you aren't alone, remember, i'm the same way. just talk to me when you need someone to talk to. i'm a friend, remember? well, it was a great write anyways! keep up the good work!
please, don't feel like you have to pretend around me!
~sprints |
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