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Shadow
Contributed by
AshRayne
on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:01:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A shadowed veil of mystery,
A haunting for me,
A whisper in my ear,
Turn to treasury.
Shadow in my dreams,
My mind makes you real,
And you are there to comfort me,
Really make me feel.
Tell me all your thoughts,
I know them to be true,
All but mystify me,
Tell me what to do.
Show me the way,
The way to immortality,
Without the feeling,
To burn, and tarnish me.
Show me the dark,
Without light,
Give me excitement,
Without the fright.
Show me the love,
With no pain,
Never let me,
Feel the same.
Shadowed veil,
Hide all the certainty.
Leave nothing in the path,
Dont leave me misery.
Shadow,
My mind makes you real.
I can see you,
I can feel.
A shadowed veil of mystery,
A haunting for me,
A whisper in my ear,
Turn to treasury.
Copyright ©
AshRayne
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2005-08-10 00:01:27]
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Re: Shadow
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by ebooibo on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:24:22 AM AEST
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| thats deep yo damn it brings power 2 my heart keep it coming... |
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Re: Shadow
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by ebooibo on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:24:46 AM AEST
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| thats deep yo damn it brings power 2 my heart keep it coming... |
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Re: Shadow
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:29:28 AM AEST
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| what mystery ..what.. a nice write |
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Re: Shadow
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 03:44:37 AM AEST
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a very touching and meaningful write this is,
you are indeed magnificent in your presentation . . . .
Ben |
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Re: Shadow
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by Ineedanap on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:03:13 AM AEST
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| Powerful, i loved it. This has become my new favorite form you.:-) |
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