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The Pain
Contributed by
Momen
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Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 02:51:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Hit
Bruised
Cut up
Abused
Broken hearts
Falling apart
Never any love
Always torn in two
All i needed was a hug
But you were never there
Now i sit in this dark corner
Watching the blood drain from me
I'm now going to die
Why don't you care?!
Copyright ©
Momen
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2005-08-10 02:51:18]
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Re: The Pain
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jane_Doe on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 04:05:30 AM AEST
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| Nice rhyming! The rhythm was great too! Very sad though... I hope you do not feel this way and it you do, I hope things get better. |
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Re: The Pain
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 06:26:43 AM AEST
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very sad and intense write.
well done |
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