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Why Struggle
Contributed by
LongingFor
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Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 01:42:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Left outside in the rain
Nobody cares about your pain
Wish somebody would love you never change remain the same
But if its not meant to be, why force it?
If you feel like dying every day anyway.
You care, love respect yourself
And want the best for yourself
You share, help, forgive, but kindness dont come around
Karma does.
Its not fair what did I do wrong?
What did I say? What did I feel?
Why even have people that suffer in pain like a fish without water.
Like the sun never shines and God went to sleep
Its always dark and lonely
Feeling cold and hungry.
Its not fair, I try so hard
I build a bridge over my problems
Every morning waking up in the morning
Searching for myself, waking up in pain
Going to sleep in the rain.
Nobody would stand up for me
Always have myself and me
But when your faith is gone and you lost hope
You wont survive without somebody by your side
Its not fair, I struggle so hard to find my way
To see the sunlight
And people say live every minute of your life like there is no tomorrow
While there they go planning their future what
****** attitude theyre gonna give tomorrow.
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Re: Why Struggle
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by GurlyTye on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 02:08:20 PM AEST
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Re: Why Struggle
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by Archie on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 09:58:20 PM AEST
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This actually reminds me of a song.;
"Life is too hard for living
but I'm afraid to die
I don't know what's up there
beyond the sky
Its been a long
a long time coming but i know
a change is gonna come
oh yes it will
Then i go to my brother
and i say brother help me please
but he winds up, knocking me
back down on my knees
There were times that i thought
I would not last for long
My minds finally made up
to carry on
It's been a long,
a long time coming
and i know
a change is gonna come
oh yes it will"
Song quote "A Change is gonna Come" by Sam Cooke
This poem is a very strong write. |
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