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Bye-Bye Pencil
Contributed by
ScreenSaver77
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Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 01:56:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I melt in the presence of your cosmos
Yet gravity keeps on steering me back
I cannot thrust into your atmosphere
My hunger is strong, still some things I lack
From the first day I saw you
I wanted to really enter your soul
To embrace your gentle styles
To experience youre inner ardent coal
I want to open this chapter with you
Still something is holding me back
Receptivity is out of my reach, although
I can feel it breathing behind my neck
This is why I use a pencil just in case
To erase these rigorous memories of mine
I wish with you I could use a pen
I just cant as yet, if only I could get a sign
I guess its the risk I have to take
Still, its a tough one I have to make
After all theres a lot at stake
Its a win or lose, a make or break
It could rain with celestial happiness and joy
It could rain with sadness and destroy
Maybe Im better off staying coy
Maybe Ill get broken like a toy
A chance is what Ill take
I weighted in all my options
I came with one conclusion
Never again will I have to say, What if
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Re: Bye-Bye Pencil
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by colinbaker62 on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 02:21:37 PM AEST
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This is good. I think you should take the plunge and see what happens. Very often, negative thoughts are not born out in reality. Thoughts are, after all, only thoughts ! Not facts.....
Good luck, Colin |
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