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My Nurse
Contributed by
Badboy
on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 02:15:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My nurse
(to Lilian Serage)
She came and left
To her I will never know what a was worth
But to me she will always be the nurse of my heart
The only girl I ever loved
I opened all my heart for her
But ended up being hurt
Even though life is no fair
My love for her grew every day like hair
To myself I always asked
Why didnt she give me a task?
For which I had to complete
In other to win her heart
Every day I pray to God
To bring back my love
And this time I will make sure
That we become Bonnie and Claude
The only girl I ever loved, Nurse
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Badboy
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2005-08-10 14:15:31]
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Re: My Nurse
(User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 05:15:05 PM AEST
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You should listen to the song
"The Nurse Who Loved Me" by A Perfect Circle
I liked this but this line here:
"My love for her grew every day like hair"
was very odd, good job though.
Oh and it's Bonnie and Clyde not Claude
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Re: My Nurse
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 10:30:43 AM AEST
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| I guesss i can call this artistic interpetation. Not a bad write. You took something you like and let it inspire you. |
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