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so to the search.....
Contributed by
roisin
on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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someone kind
someone gentle, but not without spirit
someone who can make light of adversity and misfortune
to share the triumphs however small
someone to be at one with facing sometimes a cold demanding world
but unafraid now because we are no longer alone
a soulmate
my dearest of friends
exciting and fun to be with
a pillar of strength
that takes me to the plains and mountains of pleasure
me always coming when I'm on top
my gran always said
what's for you, won't go by you
so has my search ended?
has he been here all along?
if so
let the music play on.............
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roisin
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2003-01-13 15:40:00]
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Re: so to the search.....
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 04:22:15 PM AEST
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And your Gran was right, Roisin... what's for you, wont pass you by... it will stare you in face when you least expect it....
Thanks for your comments..
Jenni |
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Re: so to the search.....
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by nomad on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 06:46:35 PM AEST
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| Another stunningly beautiful write, Roisin. The depth of your passion and dreams leaves me breathless. I am awed in the presence of your pure beauty. Your gran was a wise woman, and the music is playing. Listen beyond the sounds of the mundane world's thoughts and din. You are the orchestra AND the conductor in your love's symphony. |
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Re: so to the search.....
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by mckayla on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:09:04 PM AEST
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| This one was my faverate that I have read so far in your work!!! |
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Re: so to the search.....
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 11:14:20 PM AEST
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| This is a really nice write Roisin. I liked reading it. Thanx for the comments on my poetry. *S* Cynthia |
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