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One Shared Fear
Contributed by
theraven
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Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 04:36:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It's like seeing the flash of brown in the forest
It's like the crowd after the home-team scores
It's like an oak splitting from an arch in the sky
It's like twelve pounds colliding with the ten-pin
It's like the classroom after a student talks back
It's like a laser light show
It's like water flowing out of a strainer
It's like wearing a Halloween mask,
Only not.
It's like a black wind sweeping over everyone
It's like a blanket thrown on you, putting you
To sleep forever
-The Raven-
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2005-08-10 16:36:38]
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Re: One Shared Fear
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 05:36:19 PM AEST
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it's like silence...or maybe death. i'm probably wrong..but that's what it speaks to me...
anyway, great write, i liked it
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