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Blame Me
Contributed by
Writting_Fever
on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 06:17:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Yes it's true,
That now I'm free,
But if you only knew him,
You wouldn't blame me,
It was wierd,
We talked openly,
If you only knew what he said,
You wouldn't blame me,
He gazed in my eyes,
Like no one else could see,
Only if you saw that look,
You wouldn't blame me,
The way he hugged,
So long and wonderfully,
Made my legs would go numb,
You wouldn't blame me,
It was me and him,
Together lovingly,
But now I fell in love,
And you can't blame me.
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Writting_Fever
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2005-08-10 18:17:39]
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Re: Blame Me
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by EricBRamey on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 06:24:41 PM AEST
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| Yeah...it stinks when you love them and they don't love you back!!!! This is a nice take on a tough and emotionally challenging subject...great work...Eric |
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Re: Blame Me
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by twisted_dreams on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 11:17:58 PM AEST
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wow.. that is really good! the words are so strong.. and it flows very nicely! Keep up the good work!
~Sidney~
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Re: Blame Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 08:14:43 PM AEST
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straight from the heart this sounds like, well
done like your style . . .
Ben |
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