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Young woman turned cold
Contributed by
Ineedanap
on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:49:47 AM in AEST
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Peer unto my soul
tell me what you see
Is it not made of coal
As black as ebony?
Peer into my eyes
look closely and you'll find
Teardrops waiting to be freed
Behind this thick facade of mine
Listen to my heartbeat
It's never told a lie
As the beat gets slower
You'll know it's my time to wave "goodbye"
Feel my withered body
Scarred from a battle within
Touch the bumps and bruises
That parade upon my skin
Tell me this is not the body
Of an overworked soul
Tell me this is not the body
Of a young woman turned cold
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Re: Young woman turned cold
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 10:38:38 AM AEST
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I'm surprised no one has commented. Visualization of the emotional tones is good in this piece.
"Listen to my heartbeat
It's never told a lie"
I like those lines.
A dark write, but well done.
Blessings, J. |
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Re: Young woman turned cold
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:29:39 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem, loved it. SLipSiX. I know how you feel. |
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