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Lame Trails
Contributed by
Barbarella
on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Trails of tears down my face
laughing at the naguish as
blood continues to stain.
It was you who bought this forth
who impaled my heart
your the soul of my pain.
Now my laughter ceases
and the cold is my blanket
how i wish youd never came.
The fire that dances in your eyes
burns me with full hatred
dancing with the devils flame.
Torment, torture, trepidation
our naked spirits fly as
our bodies watch in shame.
Forever seeking the darkness that shines
not knowing the truth that follows me
my mind left for lame.
Copyright ©
Barbarella
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2003-01-13 18:00:00]
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Re: Lame Trails
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by Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP) on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 10:09:52 AM AEST
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What a beautiful and sad poem, I have felt like that for so much time, I don't know why, but when I read this I remember something I thought I had forgotten.
Well keep up the good work, I hope to read more of your work |
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Re: Lame Trails
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by hardcoreputa on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 12:57:10 PM AEST
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| that was a great poem. it really makes u think. it has a great flow to it... i hope to see more of ur work |
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