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Silver Hammer
Contributed by
jaycee
on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 03:05:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The hammer comes down
and bludgeons my head
my eyes are stuck shut
and flowing blood red
Arcing back for a swing
where crimson is sweet
like the tall sith lord said
my failure's complete
Maxwell's hammer of silver
has returned once again
shaking me out of lethar-
-gy and embrace the pain
Copyright ©
jaycee
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2005-08-11 15:05:24]
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Re: Silver Hammer
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by sprinter27 on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 03:48:43 PM AEST
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wow, powerful write, jaycee. well written... but it's sad. i actually could see this... which, truthfully, i'd rather not be able to see it. i'm sorry that you feel like this. great write, keep up the good work!!
wishing you lots of luck!!
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Re: Silver Hammer
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by Archie on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 04:52:10 PM AEST
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| Wow, I don't think i want to get hit in the head even with an imaginery hammer although the ocassioanl kick seems to help me. |
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Re: Silver Hammer
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by rockergirl94 on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 07:07:58 PM AEST
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Thats freakin' good for 15 seconds...
Awesome mental pictures
Keep writing, keep hoping
- Julie |
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Re: Silver Hammer
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:00:38 PM AEST
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Bloody and Dangerous write...
Didn't your daddy tell that playing with hammers is not good for your health?
Not bad for 15 secs... Good to see you posting again, JC...
Jenni |
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