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Tonight
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 03:44:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Tonight is the night
That I make everything right
Youve done well neglecting me,
So now its me youll never have to see
Im going to do it tonight
Its tonight Ill give up the fight
After years of being shunned
My hand has finally found the gun
At midnight, Ill walk to our pond,
Ill pull the trigger on my magic wand
Ill shoot myself in my head
And fall back into the grass bed
It is tonight that my fingers
On the handle will linger,
Theyll grip the handle tightly,
Pointer will move to the trigger slightly
Ill flip the safety switch
So I can safely fall into the ditch
Ill do it tonight at midnight
This is the night Ill give up the fight
The night I make everything right
The gun is now my only light
Its the only light in sight
Tonight will be the night
Copyright ©
sprinter27
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2005-08-11 15:44:34]
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Re: Tonight
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by Archie on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 04:11:22 PM AEST
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| Before you consider that move away from the person that is hurting you. If you kill your self that person wins. DON"T LET THAT HAPPEN. Please go talk it out with someone who you are close to. |
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Re: Tonight
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by Sahara on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 05:39:10 PM AEST
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| I agree with Archie, noone is worth that fate. There is someone out there that is capable of giving you everything you want and need, you just have to open your eyes to see them. |
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Re: Tonight
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by colinbaker62 on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 05:45:03 PM AEST
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This is very sad which was no doubt the intention, but i got to visit your profile.
Seems to me you have much to live for with all your interests, education etc, so go for the life option. make a mark in the only world of which we have knowledge.
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Re: Tonight
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by colinbaker62 on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 05:47:47 PM AEST
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P.S I was going to give this a 'five' score but I thought this might encourage you to carry out the content. So I gave it 'four' instead. lol
Colin |
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Re: Tonight
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by RainDancer2005 on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 06:04:29 PM AEST
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| Don't give in to the jerks who make you feel the ways you do. I almost killed myself but then I realized I don't need anyone to make it through MY life. Now I'm standing on my own two feet without them. |
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Re: Tonight
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 11:15:42 PM AEST
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ACK!! Sprints this better be a wonderful piece of fiction, especially after your pm...I wish I was on here earlier when you were! You're smarter and stronger than this, so I want to believe this is just you writing out your grief...Take Care girly, and I better see a pm from you tomorrow : (
Scorp.
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Re: Tonight
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 12:27:30 AM AEST
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| awesome again! i loved how all the end words rhymed in the last stanza...and its really sad that i feel like that and even think it sometimes...but i'll never do it cause i now i have to stay with you so u wont be alone...and remeber i am always here if you wanna talk! |
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Re: Tonight
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 01:12:21 PM AEST
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| Very dark and vivid. I would like to pull the trigger myself. I know the feeling of never getting anything right and the only possilbe way to do that is just making yourself disappear for good. Thanks for the write. |
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