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Sunday Mummbles
Contributed by
MadCackle
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Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 09:30:15 PM in AEST
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From the inner workings of a broken mind
Come thaughts of the substantual kind
Of days once had and jokes once played
Carefully planned and percisely layed
It's almost funny how the great mind works
At first glance thier called your little qwerks
Its these little things that keap me going
Someone farts without even knowing
If you ask me once I'll tell you the same
If you ask me twice I'll say theres no shame
A laugh a giggle A smirk a sigh
At the end of the day its these little things that get me by
Copyright ©
MadCackle
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2005-08-11 21:30:15]
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Re: Sunday Mummbles
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 10:36:14 PM AEST
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| its funny and cute. flows great and keeps the reader entertained while letting them into your sundays. great job! |
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Re: Sunday Mummbles
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by Archie on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 12:13:13 AM AEST
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| Have fun. This is a good write and quite witty |
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Re: Sunday Mummbles
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by Shnannon on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 11:46:00 AM AEST
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| This is really cute! I think a lot of people get through their days enjoying the little things. I know I do! Great write, keep up the good work! |
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Re: Sunday Mummbles
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:13:17 AM AEST
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lol.. and with all that.. let me tell you.. I talk to myself all the time. I even listen to me.. lol.. and talk back to me.
Those little simple things are more precious and any gold or silver.
***** and to go on and on and on..
one day older, one day closer to God..
lines to some song I once heard in a movie..
Jail house rock I think..
Your write made me think of that.. how is that for a little qwerk.. your write made my mind qwerk..
*****It's almost funny how the great mind works
At first glance thier called your little qwerks
Truthful write ..
RLPoetress ; )) |
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